The Youtube Evaluation videos uploaded to the last two posts have been uploaded wrongly by Youtube hence the grey emboss style at the beginning of the videos, this only effects the image of me and the sound is in no way altered throughout the videos.
This is my original final Music video for the project though after a lot of criticism from my peers I have since altered and corrected everything they have suggested and made it better in many ways, this is what they said.
- I would not be alloud to use the "Sony Music Entertainment" at the beginning of the video, as the video is not directly endorsed by them and the permission they have given me does not state that i need to do this in any way.
- The video is meant to have a contrast between the low definition handheld style filming throughout the flashback scenes but at the moment the quality is poor on all footage, I need to film the singing scenes and all the other scenes (excluding flashbacks) again to gain this contrast that i need.
- The lip syncing needs to be better by both editing it in time with the music more and with the movement of my mouth, I need to actually sing it out to make my face look believable. this is a big part of the music video and when it is right it will look really good!
- I have good footage for the flash backs but i need more of it because at the moment the video is repeating itself a lot and that is not what the audience wants to see!
- The male character needs to be framed better in the scene with the guitar, as half of his head is cut out of frame.
- Maybe cut the song length down a bit 6mins is a lot of song to find footage for.